Brand Fixing

For World Refugee Day, I posted a few poems by myself and others on Twitter and Facebook with the hashtags #worldrefugeeday and #poetry but here’s a new one I just wrote…

In the battle of the brands
brand Labor
brand Liberal
compete for niche markets
sell their wares to a demographic
they claim they have to appease
but cultivated themselves

paid Murdoch and Fairfax
to invent new customer demands

they now expect a certain type of product
fit with the latest in racist features
anti-boat rhetoric comes standard
with bogus security extras
for threats that don’t exist

and they’ve fixed the market
agreed to both leave out costly features
such as health and education
to go for the cheap sell
price brand Green out of the market
force them to play dirty too

more than sawdust in the engine
or bolts not screwed on right
the product is tainted to begin with
selling the same rotting wares
the biggest con job you’ve ever seen

under the hood
people pay with their lives
so the brands can cut costs
and make it Canberra on top

but
brand Labor is doing it tough
brand Liberal have a reputation
the tried and trusted racist brand
Labor’s just a cheap rip off
who fired the advisor that said
perhaps human rights
would be a definitive selling point
a one of a kind feature
that brand Liberal couldn’t match

EWF and engaging with Creative Writing students

I’ve thought about writing this post for a bit, and decided against it until now because I didn’t want to make a big deal of it, but I have a criticism of the Emerging Writers’ Festival this year that I think is worth opening up a discussion about.

I love EWF and have been to it every year since I moved to Melbourne, and it was one of the first outlets for me to meet other writers in Melbourne (as well as the NaNoWriMo group) that really helped me push forward with my writing and make a bigger effort at being published. It’s a great festival that I’d recommend any writer, no matter what level, attends as it’s invaluable for meeting other writers, engaging in debates and discussion around writing in Melbourne and helps you work out how to do.

That said, I wasn’t able to go to much of it this year, for the first time. I bought a ticket to the whole weekend of the Writer’s Conference, the best part, but missed most of the Saturday afternoon because I had my own poetry event on that afternoon, that I’d been booked for before the EWF dates came out, which is definitely not my gripe here, but the past few weeks for me have been fairly busy and I had to miss the Sunday, and a bunch of other events.

I study Creative Writing at RMIT. I’m in second year and started it after becoming engaged with the writing community in Melbourne and really love the course, the chance to study writing full-time. My classmates are all emerging writers too, but we found this year that the Emerging Writers’ Festival, a festival aimed at us, was right in the middle of the end of semester, as assignments were piling up, and with the stress of all those coming down upon me, I had to make the difficult choice of missing the events I wanted to go to.

And I know, speaking to other classmates in my course that they weren’t going to anything this year because of this. Last year, I took programs to my year level to give to everyone to try and get them to come to the festival. I saw myself as an unofficial ambassador because I knew the festival would be perfect for all these writers I’d just met, many just from high school. As I remember last year, the timing was a little better, but I think many missed it for similar reasons.

I realise that EWF can’t cater to every demographic’s whim and schedule and inevitably people are going to have clashes and sometimes miss things, but I feel like Creative Writing students should be a major focus for EWF and getting them along to the festival. EWF offers something quite different to what you study in class; meeting other writers, engaging with publications that you can submit to etc. and would be a perfect thing for me, my classmates and other university students to throw ourselves into during semester break. Our teachers do give us practical knowledge, encourage us to submit etc. but I feel like it’s more effective when our peers and the people were submitting alongside and for are the ones encouraging us.

I know EWF invited many of our teachers to speak at the festival and that’s great, but I think it would be worth keeping in mind next year timing the festival so its accessible to students too, because I love the festival so much that not only do I want to be involved in it next year, but I want to be able to encourage my classmates to come along too.

Poem: Taksim today

turkey1mainRevolution is so beautiful
in the present
vibrant colours of people rising
modern ordinary people alive
without fear, new courage
taking the chance,
the overstepped mark
and running

so real
very possible
moving scenes
unlike
history books and distant stories
and the dulling grey of cynics
shaking their heads
saying we, naive and optimistic

they say each country is different,
and then it happens in another
and another
and another
each a different reason
it can only happen there

it spreads
flash points out of nowhere
you never see it coming,
say it’s possible not today, but one day
and that day is today, yesterday,
and for days,
Taksim becomes today’s Tahrir
Istanbul today’s Cairo
and right-now and tomorrow,
Turkey is today’s
impossible revolution

Taksim looks so different
from the way we saw it
with flares, flags and infinite numbers

When we were there, just tourists
we stood afar from police
weapons at their side
armoured vehicles behind them
and my Turkish friend, warning me
it’s so unlike Australia
so hard to even march
so impossible to speak

how unlike Taksim now

Revolution is a new place,
a new time,
shakes off its impossibility
a defiant, stubborn thing

Poem: The Call of the Racist

Performed on the open mic at House of Bricks spoken word night, last night

Photo by Michael Reynolds

Photo by Michael Reynolds

The racist,
a flourishing species
found around the world
densely populated
in most of Australia
habitats include
halls of parliament
offices of football clubs
a large colony in Cronulla
known by their intimidating battle cry:

but, but but, but
I’m not a racist but..
We’re all racist
No one is racist,
black people are racist too
I’m not a racist but it’s true

But but but
I’m not a racist but

I let black people in my football team
I got called an ape once too
I didn’t mean it
It was just a joke
Just a joke
Can’t you take a joke
But but but
No malice intended

I’m not a racist but but
They need to come here legally
It’s not my fault, there’s a little racist in everybody
I’m not a racist but but

The racist. Evades capture
Feigning jokes,
reacts badly
on public transport
The racist survives
by their litany of excuses
their intimidating call of but but
so no one will challenge it

What I’ve been up to: the blog, assignments, getting gigs and the novel

What have I been up to? Over the past year or so, this blog has become less and less central to my work as a writer, but nonetheless remains important for occasional updates about where my writing is appearing and progress with projects not yet out in the world. I’ve mostly been busy with spoken word gigs and university assignments, and I’m looking forward to semester break, with overly optimistic plans once again for reading and out of uni projects.

I’ve come to realise recently, a lot of the kinds of writing I’d used to blog has now gone on to better things, such as guest blog posts for Overland. That began when I was encouraged by the Overland editors to pitch my ideas to them instead of pitching ideas on Twitter that people might like to read on my blog.

As well as that, my work editing MelbourneSpokenWord.com has been going really well, and the website has been growing in recognition and traffic. We have some terrific reviewers, our gig guide is growing quite long, we hosted our first spoken word gig a few weeks ago, printed stickers, and hit our daily pageview record yesterday after I reviewed Anis Mojgani’s gig at the Footscray Community Arts Centre. In the future, more commentary about the spoken word scene in Melbourne will take place there, and hopefully by a wide range of poets and performers.

It’s also surprising how many gigs I’ve been offered all at once. I went a little while without performing and then found myself performing at a bunch, including doing a feature for the second time at the Dan Poets on a Saturday afternoon. And I’m hosting the relaunch of Keep Left on June 22 with our feature being Maxine Beneba Clarke, which is quite exciting, especially since she won the Victorian Premiers Literary Award for an Unpublished Manuscript on Thursday night, at the launch of the Emerging Writers’ Festival.

With uni, the main thing I’ve been working on is my novel, or that’s where my head’s been most of the time. The other assignments and work takes up a lot of time and I’ve been busy with that, but the novel writing is the most exciting and I want to dedicate more time to it. This is the novel I finished the first draft of in 2010, as part of NaNoWriMo. It was originally called Robbin’ Toorak but I’ve recently changed it to Screwjob. It’s coming together now in the third draft and if I can push forward to finish this draft, I feel like eventually this is one I will reach the stage of submitting for publication, which I’ve never felt about any other novel attempt.

All in all, this means I’ve been incredibly busy over the last few months and one of the sad things is I’ve missed more of the Emerging Writers’ Festival than I usually do. This has also been in part due to social anxiety I admit, so I’ve ran from the opportunity to network and catch up with other writers in Melbourne this time but I hope to get to a couple of events at least before it finishes on Sunday.

Review: Father’s Day by Tony Birch

You know that feeling when you get on a reading roll? You finish a few books in quick succession and it’s like you’ve taken on this momentum. You have to be lucky with the books you pick though or you bog yourself in something that allows itself to be put down midway through and forgotten about. Tony Birch’s second collection of short stories, Father’s Day was certainly not one of those books that you could put down for too long.

7031511It’s a subtle yet incredibly moving collection of short fiction that’s over-arching themes can be best described as dealing with family, those on the fringes of society and characters with something missing. After reading the story ‘Shadowboxing’ and his novel Blood last year, I have come to love not just how Birch is drawn toward dealing with marginal characters, like I do in my own writing, but his realist mode of writing. It is direct and unobtrusive. The danger I find with collections of short fiction is the pause between each piece and having to immerse yourself in a new one each time. But Birch’s realism allows for you to do that easily. You are not lost each time in thick obscure description in the beginning. Birch places you in the scene clearly and immediately. It is like the author is not even there.

But I guess critics of writing like Birch’s would argue that there is no art to it, and Birch often breaks the rule that you’re meant to “show not tell” but he does it so well. The statement of “fact” and the placement of those events without the intervention of the author is in itself quite moving. And to me, the style and the insignificant way in which he finishes most of his stories conveys a realism situated in the often mundane, subtle and trivial details that portray what it is to be a marginal character in society, so much so that they seem to be the kinds of stories that other writers would overlook and deem not significant enough to tell.

I’m someone who looks for books that punch you in the stomach. I look for great, cataclysmic events that leave me breathless. This collection is not like that but still leaves me thinking this is a very good collection of short stories. There are moments when pieces feel unfinished, but necessarily so and the sense of loss you get from some of them is a reaction that I think is not always the one you seek, but I think worthwhile all the same.

Review: Loaded by Christos Tsiolkas

I haven’t posted a book review on here in a while. Actually, I haven’t posted on here in a while, but I felt compelled to say something about Tsiolkas’ Loaded. After reading it in just two-sittings last week, on the way to Perth and then back again. I read The Slap a few years ago and it’s a novel I still think about, and had been meaning to read more of his work, and my friends had raved about Loaded.

1208928It is sharp and intense. It’s about a 19-year-old boy Ari who likes to have sex and take a lot of drugs, and it takes place over one night. The novel moves seamlessly through the various places he goes out to, to the various people he meets. It feels a little like a drug trip as you read it, but it’s never just drugs and sex and nothing under the surface.

As with many successful novels, I think Tsiolkas has managed to nail the voice, along with a kind of minimalism that is not too over the top. The casual language and pace make it easy to keep reading and finish in a short while. There is politics there. It alludes to a feeling of apathy and powerlessness that I think was a common mood of the 90s and it speaks a lot to me about the motivations for the kind of lifestyle Ari leads, without being patronising about it, perhaps because it also feels to me as if it might be semi-autobiographical. There are details that seem to match up.

I saw Tsiolkas speak at the Wheeler Centre a few weeks back, where I bought the book and got him to sign it. He did a reading from his forthcoming novel, Barracuda. Like someone like Tony Birch, he has a fascination for characters perhaps marginal, perhaps just those overlooked. I’m interested in that too as a writer. But I’ve only just discovered them recently, never the kinds of texts they gave to me in high-school, but then I wonder if I would’ve read them then.