Review: Father’s Day by Tony Birch

You know that feeling when you get on a reading roll? You finish a few books in quick succession and it’s like you’ve taken on this momentum. You have to be lucky with the books you pick though or you bog yourself in something that allows itself to be put down midway through and forgotten about. Tony Birch’s second collection of short stories, Father’s Day was certainly not one of those books that you could put down for too long.

7031511It’s a subtle yet incredibly moving collection of short fiction that’s over-arching themes can be best described as dealing with family, those on the fringes of society and characters with something missing. After reading the story ‘Shadowboxing’ and his novel Blood last year, I have come to love not just how Birch is drawn toward dealing with marginal characters, like I do in my own writing, but his realist mode of writing. It is direct and unobtrusive. The danger I find with collections of short fiction is the pause between each piece and having to immerse yourself in a new one each time. But Birch’s realism allows for you to do that easily. You are not lost each time in thick obscure description in the beginning. Birch places you in the scene clearly and immediately. It is like the author is not even there.

But I guess critics of writing like Birch’s would argue that there is no art to it, and Birch often breaks the rule that you’re meant to “show not tell” but he does it so well. The statement of “fact” and the placement of those events without the intervention of the author is in itself quite moving. And to me, the style and the insignificant way in which he finishes most of his stories conveys a realism situated in the often mundane, subtle and trivial details that portray what it is to be a marginal character in society, so much so that they seem to be the kinds of stories that other writers would overlook and deem not significant enough to tell.

I’m someone who looks for books that punch you in the stomach. I look for great, cataclysmic events that leave me breathless. This collection is not like that but still leaves me thinking this is a very good collection of short stories. There are moments when pieces feel unfinished, but necessarily so and the sense of loss you get from some of them is a reaction that I think is not always the one you seek, but I think worthwhile all the same.

Review: Loaded by Christos Tsiolkas

I haven’t posted a book review on here in a while. Actually, I haven’t posted on here in a while, but I felt compelled to say something about Tsiolkas’ Loaded. After reading it in just two-sittings last week, on the way to Perth and then back again. I read The Slap a few years ago and it’s a novel I still think about, and had been meaning to read more of his work, and my friends had raved about Loaded.

1208928It is sharp and intense. It’s about a 19-year-old boy Ari who likes to have sex and take a lot of drugs, and it takes place over one night. The novel moves seamlessly through the various places he goes out to, to the various people he meets. It feels a little like a drug trip as you read it, but it’s never just drugs and sex and nothing under the surface.

As with many successful novels, I think Tsiolkas has managed to nail the voice, along with a kind of minimalism that is not too over the top. The casual language and pace make it easy to keep reading and finish in a short while. There is politics there. It alludes to a feeling of apathy and powerlessness that I think was a common mood of the 90s and it speaks a lot to me about the motivations for the kind of lifestyle Ari leads, without being patronising about it, perhaps because it also feels to me as if it might be semi-autobiographical. There are details that seem to match up.

I saw Tsiolkas speak at the Wheeler Centre a few weeks back, where I bought the book and got him to sign it. He did a reading from his forthcoming novel, Barracuda. Like someone like Tony Birch, he has a fascination for characters perhaps marginal, perhaps just those overlooked. I’m interested in that too as a writer. But I’ve only just discovered them recently, never the kinds of texts they gave to me in high-school, but then I wonder if I would’ve read them then.

Alan Sillitoe’s The Loneliness of the Long-Distance Runner and angry working-class voices

I am prone to obsessions. I don’t just get into something, I consume everything to do with it. My current one, in case you haven’t picked up on it, is running. Not only am I running a lot and feeling strange when I go a few days without, but it keeps coming up in my writing and am reading things inspired by it. Writing is hard at the moment, a lot harder than running is it seems, and as a result, I keep falling back on writing about running, letting it creep into everything because it’s what’s in my head and keeps the words moving.

And my obsession took me further. From a uni classmate recommending an essay in Believer, The Race That is Not About Winning, and in that finding the mention of a novella, ‘The Loneliness of the Long-Distance Runner’ by Alan Sillitoe, I was led on an unexpected trail of new writing that both sated my new craze for running and found resonance in the radical socialist part of me.

The novella, part of a collection of the same title, is about a working-class man put into prison for theft, and as a way of potentially getting his sentence shortened and a bit of freedom, accepts the offer from the governor to train for this distance race between the other prisons. He’s going to be the pride of the prison and win the cup for the suits at the top and gets special privileges to leave the prison early in the mornings and run. But despite the chance of getting out early, the narrator refuses to suck up to the governor and give him the honour so stops just before the end to let someone else win.

Sillitoe, in the narrator’s voice, manages to capture a bunch of feelings of why I like running and at the same time encapsulate the real class divide within English society at the time. It is rife with comments about hating the rich, the police etc. That voice, the angry working-class voice is something I’m interested in writing and kind of reminds me that I’m able to use these obsessions, distractions even, to write in those voices and talk about themes that I’ve always talked about.

Book Review: What I talk about when I talk about running – Haruki Murakami

In line with my recent running craze, another writer and runner recommended Haruki Murakami’s What I talk about when I talk about running, a memoir of sorts about Murakami’s long standing dedication to long distance running and writing, and how it all kind of links together.

It is a short and engaging book, helped greatly by Murakami’s matter-of-fact minimalist style, or at least that of the translation. And I don’t think you need to be into running to get anything out of it, but as I continue to come across writers who see running as their physical activity of choice, I think those of us who are both, recognise an affinity with the two activities.

Much of the book focusses on his preparation for the New York Marathon, how he prepares, what challenges he faces, particularly the onset of old age and inevitably slower times. Murakami’s incredibly philosophical about the whole thing and provides some honest insights into mortality and why he continues to run. It’s due to needing to keep healthy when you spend so much time as a writer at your desk, which makes sense, except weight isn’t really a concern for me (I can’t gain weight for some weird reason) so running is about keeping fit in case the bits inside me, the bits I can’t see, might be breaking down without any outward signs of my lack of health. It’s also time to think, which hasn’t exactly worked out that well for me personally yet and writing is much harder at the moment than running. You can keep running regardless of mental barriers. The process remains exactly the same. One foot in front of the other. I seem to have more control over it than I would writing sometimes, how exactly to start or attack an idea or image. Often these things puzzle me or it’s not as clear as looking ahead down a path and knowing how far left I have to go.

Through What I talk about when I talk about running, you get a real sense that Murakami is an incredibly focussed and disciplined person and that his routine means he probably doesn’t find writing as hard or sporadic as I might. It’s worth reading for writers who feel they lack motivation and discipline, as reading memoirs from writers often does.

Book Review: Railsea – China Miéville

It has become fairly common to describe each one of China Miéville’s novels as very different from the others. He’s quite commonly quoted as saying he’d like to write a novel in every genre, and certainly each one is unique. He could never be accused of just finding a formula that readers like and resigning himself to rehashing it over and over. But as much as Railsea is certainly a change, especially from his previous novel Embassytown, it is a return in some ways. It reminds me a lot of King Rat, his first novel.

Miéville describes it as a novel for ‘all ages’ which is different to the way some people have described it as ‘young adult.’ The language isn’t ‘dumbed down’ as such, but it’s just not at the level of Embassytown which employed an impressive use of vocabulary fitting in with the themes of linguistics. He says it’s a novel in homage to his younger-self, and it’s in the plot and story that this is the case. It’s a fun, adventure story, full of the in depth world building that we’ve become used to. You tear right through it.

The railsea is an intertwining mass of railway tracks, that densely spread out over an expanse of earth full of nasty burrowing animals, like moles and bugs, larger than usual, with teeth. It’s like a maritime adventure with trains. The metaphor and the way Miéville has a ‘railsea version’ of almost everything is quite fascinating. And he introduces us to everything as the story moves along, perhaps even as he was discovering it all himself. It’s a riff on Mobydick, with the captain of moletrain, the Medes, hunting some great big ivory coloured mole with the main character, Sham, leading the story off along other tracks. There’s pirates, imperialist navies and rogue explorers.

Where’s the politics in it? I’m often asked that about his work. I think, as with Embassytown, it’s mostly in the world-building. The foundations of his stories and the world’s they are set in reflect his (and my) view of the world. You won’t miss the point of the book if you’re not also a Marxist. It might just be a good story, or you might pick up that the way certain forces relate to each other reflect an understanding of capitalism. Not just classes, but as with Mankini, one of the main countries, world superpowers. It’s not one dimensional either, as all characters have flaws and most of them, sympathetic qualities.

Without giving away spoilers, the politics of Railsea culminates in the ending too. As the characters explore the railsea and look for uncharted areas, we discover it with them and at the end there is an analogy, a very overt one, rife with imagery and meaning that almost came out of nowhere as Miéville led us along what is for the most part, just an adventure story. It reflects the times we’re living in and was an apt culmination of a satisfying read.

It is a novel for all ages. Miéville can almost write what he likes. His fans follow him along whatever area he wants to write in, right down to the ‘young adult’ or ‘all ages’ works like Un Lun Dun. There’s no division between the ages of his readers. I’m sure his older followers will like this just as much, as say I’m sure his younger readers can enjoy his other stuff, even if they have to refer back to a dictionary every once and a while.

Book Review: Her Father’s Daughter – Alice Pung

Part two of a series of reviews from the Contemporary Australian Writing reading list from RMIT. In this review, I look at ‘Her Father’s Daughter’ by Alice Pung.

Her Father’s Daughter – Alice Pung
Black Inc. Books 2011

Something has to be said for a book that can make you shed a tear before you even finish the prologue. I seek them out, even if it seems a little macabre, because I think a text is pretty special if it can move you like that. Alice Pung’s Her Father’s Daughter is a beautiful and often gut-wrenching memoir about her parents, particularly her father and how her relationship with him was influenced by what came before: Cambodia, the Killing Fields, Pol Pot, ‘the black bandits’ and finding refuge in Australia.

Before reading Alice’s moving personal story, I had only surface details of the Killing Fields and the atrocities that went on in Cambodia. And it’s the introduction to the details through a personal individual human story that makes the book so successful at getting across the toll on human lives during the time. How many died exactly? That’s a statistic that you can brush over in a second, it doesn’t embed itself quite like the images that Alice creates for us so we don’t forget.

And the images created are vivid, often touching with her beautiful use of metaphor. It’s used sparingly for greater impact and allows the reader to be carried along by sparser prose for the rest of the time. I feel it’s quite successful in that balance, allows us to know a little bit more of what Alice is feeling than the more minimalist texts on the list.

What I found striking about the book is after the prologue, I expected it to be mostly about her father’s story in Cambodia but for much of the book, Alice tells anecdotes about her relationship with her father but it sets us up for the second half, with questions and conceptions of her father in our mind that leads to an understanding of the first part of the book.

The stories and images that make up the second half are graphic and disturbing. I think it’s important that Alice didn’t flinch away from the details. These stories of genocide are so often toned down, or just not talked about and they are blemishes on our history that need to be remembered. The only criticism was that I was looking for more, for how her father and mother got to Australia as refugees fleeing what Alice had just presented for us.

It would have been timely given the debate about asylum seekers coming by boat when at that time, Cambodian and Vietnamese refugees arrived before the introduction of the detention centres we see today. Alice remarks at the beginning about how her father wishes she didn’t write about such issues. It’s part of his defensive character and how he wishes to just move on and forget about his history despite Alice’s questions. Has she written about this elsewhere? I’d really like to read about it.

If Her Father’s Daughter had just been something more than a broad history, a human story to a history I didn’t know the details of, than it would have done its job, but it’s more than that, it becomes no longer just a history but a vivid illustration about how those events affect the present day, how her father sees the world and how it affects her. It’s quite an incredible feat of narrative and language.

Book Review: Blood – Tony Birch

In the next few months, this blog will be the home to reviews of Contemporary Australian Writing as per the reading list of a Creative Writing subject of the same name. There are six books on the list, most published in 2011. The reviews will not be in the usual format, may contain spoilers and will relate to my own personal reading experience, perhaps my own writing and how the books potentially change that as my tastes and ideas shift. The first of these reviews is of Blood by Tony Birch.

Blood – Tony Birch
University of Queensland Press 2011

I had come across Tony Birch during a class last semester on short fiction. We were introduced to Shadowboxing and I was struck by his well written working-class characters and his ability to impart meaning and depth of character in simple things like a father trying to teach his son boxing. It was also a realisation that I was beginning to enjoy this ‘minimalist’ style that I’ve been reading. I was also surprised to find that Blood is Birch’s debut novel, which seems like an inexact label given his experience with short fiction and notable collections.

Blood reminds me a lot of MJ Hyland’s This is How for the use of minimalist prose, very exact and simple yet conveying a lot in the actions of the characters, but also for Birch and Hyland’s ability to say a lot whilst a lot of the plot surrounds everyday things. There is something about the style that makes reading the text addictive and able to read it very quickly. The events seem to happen at the level of the individual characters rather than worldly events, perhaps this is something I’ve noticed as I read less ‘genre’ fiction and more ‘literary.’

In Blood, Jessie, with his sister Rachel, narrates their lives of moving about a lot with their mother, Gwen, who doesn’t like to be called ‘mum’, and trying to grow up, whilst Gwen lives in hope with each new partner and they essentially have to look after themselves. You really get a sense of how shit it is to live a childhood so unstable, unable to root yourself anywhere. The two kids don’t seem to have any friends other than each other. It is an experience coming out of their class background and the nature of Gwen only being able to find casual work in bars.

And whilst in some senses the family can be seen as an institution that holds people back, for Jessie and Rachel, their bond is all they really have. It is their only hope when everyone and everything around them doesn’t seem to care about them or what happens to them. This is symbolised in both of them cutting into their fingers and rubbing their blood together so they can be ‘whole’ brother and sister after their mother reveals that they are born to different fathers. Their family histories to Gwen are often treated like accusations of how they are not normal, like when Gwen refers back to Jessie’s indigenous father.

It is out of the story of their transitory lives and getting to know Jessie and Rachel, that Birch is able to impact us as readers so successfully when the stakes of the plot become much higher. The ending, though open ended and leaving you raw, hits you with the contrast as it all escalates beyond something so ordinary, like we could have lived that life ourselves to make you feel that perhaps your own life could unravel and be thrown upside down like that. Birch says in his acknowledgements that he has no idea how it ends. I might have felt a little cheated after I turned the last page, but it seems apt. Where do Jessie and Rachel live now? I wonder about them as I would a real pair of siblings.

Book Review: The Emerging Writer

An Insider’s Guide to Your Writing Journey

The Emerging Writer
Edited by Karen Pickering
Published by The Emerging Writers’ Festival

I’ll begin with an important (and exciting) disclosure that my piece ‘Occupying Writers’ appears in this important collection about writers and writing, so that may taint my view of the book. In that light, this isn’t particularly objective, but the best way to get an idea about the book is to read it.

Edited by Karen Pickering and published by the wonderful Emerging Writers’ Festival, I really recommend this collection to writers, especially those hovering around that label: ‘Emerging.’ It contains pieces by a whole variety of emerging and emerged writers, on a whole variety of topics, from the technical to the organic and inspirational, from a variety of perspectives, and across a variety of questions and issues.

I read it cover to cover (including an overly critical reading of my own piece) and I guess I immersed myself in it, like I did the festival, but it’s something you can read at your pace, around other books, and look back to for guidance if you’re struggling with something in particular.

There were a few pieces that particularly struck me and gave me a bit to think about. The first was Johannes Jakob’s piece, ‘How to Behave Around a Dying Gazelle.’ It struck a nerve of familiarity with me as he talked about how we as writers, for better or for worse, conflate ourselves with our work, and that success or failure of your writing can feel like it’s a judgement on you as a person. The anxiety of how, or if, people receive a piece of my writing, or if they turn up to a spoken word gig, often feels more important to me than more personal occasions like birthdays, but Jakob’s piece gave me food for thought.

The other piece was by Sam Cooney with the awfully long title, ‘If Kurt Vonnegut Can Start Out Writing Pretty Bad Science Fiction Stories and Still End Up Becoming Kurt Vonnegut, Maybe There’s Hope?’ Cooney manages to articulate something else that I have a familiar feeling about, the struggle to do justice to the events or ideas we’re trying to express through writing. Sometimes writing feels like a real struggle and that you haven’t quite managed to succeed in putting into words what you had in your head.

Other pieces by Maria Papas, Rebecca Harkins-Cross, Stephanie Honor Convery, Tiggy Johnson, Kirsten Innes, Esther Anatolitis and Karen Andrews all manage to do similar things and resonate with me. They have personal resonance with my own writing life, the issues I am facing and the stage I’m at with my writing. I’m sure other readers will have similar or completely different pieces that particular grab them and make them think, clarify and move forward as writers.

It’s available as a print-on-demand book through Blurb and as an DRM-free EPUB eBook on the Kobo Store.

Book Review: Death of a Ladies' Man – Alan Bissett

Novels with contradictory or unlikable characters can be a tough read, this is especially so with sexist characters where the reader struggles to work whether the author intends them to be portrayed as such, or whether they want people to be sympathetic. In this light, Death of a Ladies’ Man by Alan Bissett can be a challenging read but worth it for what is says in the end.

Death of a Ladies' ManI bought the Kindle edition after hearing Alan read an excerpt at the opening of the Emerging Writers’ Festival this year, immediately charmed by his Scottish accent, a familiarity with Trainspotting, the snappy style and the working-class character. The writing is fresh and easy to keep reading, but perhaps having Bissett’s accent in your head helps. Incidentally, this is the first novel I’ve read on the Kindle in its totality. Previously, I’d been finishing novels I’d begun reading in print, or using it to read shorter texts.

To the novel’s credit I think, I both loathed and sympathised with Charlie Bain, the passionate and radical English teacher and womanizer at the centre of the story. He is conflicting in the way all good characters should be and I guess, reflective of real people.

There is a divide between his two sides that threaten to collide. At work, he wants the working-class kids to be something, to learn the great writers, to become the socialist he always wanted to be. But in his private life, his urges and habits with women are allowed to run loose, threatening to unravel everything. And though I was confused at the beginning as to what Bissett was trying to say about this character, whether we were meant to like his behaviour, by the end you’re left begging for him to put an end to it and get his life back in order.

And these aspects of Bain’s character shift poetically between teaching, back story and the club scene through a shake up in the kind of traditional narrative form of writing, with Bissett employing stream of consciousness, abstract forms of writing and unusual typography that give an almost hallucinogenic quality to the writing that fits with the constant use of drugs in the novel. Though at times, I’m not sure the Kindle version replicated this properly, but I am yet to see a print edition to see how it was meant to look. That said, these alternate ways of presenting the text and telling the story made for interesting reading, and when he wrote phonetically, it brought me back to Trainspotting again though not quite so overwhelming.

The realistic and contradictory character added with the writing style would make for a great enough novel, but the ending topped it off, with a nice punch in the gut, just how I like it. Death of a Ladies’ Man does what good literature should do, leaving a mark on the reader well after the book is closed (or turned off.)

Book Review: Embassytown by China Miéville

One of the main problems with having this almost irrational obsession with China Miéville is that I now go into reading his novels with very high hopes, expecting to be grabbed straight away and by the end, blown away. I was very excited to receive a copy of his latest novel, Embassytown, before it was released. This was the first time I received a book free for review. So I am a little embarrassed it took me so long to finish and therefore review, especially due to my high regard for the author.

With Embassytown, Miéville enters the ‘hard sci-fi’ genre and does amazing things, exploring complex concepts of language and translation within a world that is deeply filled in, though I felt like it took long to get into the actual main story to be told.

The novel is set on a planet at the edge of the ‘immer’ – kind of the known area in which space travel can happen via a kind of space-punkish method of travel called immersing which is similar to colonial era travel by sea. On this planet, humans co-exist with very alien aliens, the Ariekei, and Miéville did very well to make them far removed from human beings, with complex language using two mouths and the fact that thought and truth is linked inseparably from speaking.

The differences between our language and there’s, the problems with communication are explained a lot throughout the work, but I never quite got it until the end. It’s a bit hard to explain in a review which is why it’s worth actually reading the book. Anyway, communication is done through Ambassodors, two people, like twins in body and thought, so similar that the Ariekei consider them one being. It is when a new kind of Ambassador comes and communication breaks down that we get our story. But I felt like this all came rather late.

There is a lot of back story at the start, and even though some of this back story is about the narrator, Avice Benner Cho, I never felt like I got to know her, other than on the surface. The real depth is in the world and the politics of the society, which was fascinating for a time, but to my shame, I put this novel down for a bit when it wasn’t going anywhere fast enough for me to keep reading. It wasn’t until I picked it up again and I got into the second half, and especially much later that it really got moving quickly in the end.

I really wanted to love this book, and I think the story it tells in the end is fascinating, the world Miéville creates so detailed, but there was something about the writing that didn’t grab me. Often it felt like a report, rather than a novel in places. There was lots of ‘telling’ and I kind of felt detached from the events. But perhaps this has something to do with the genre in which its written, something that is very clearly meant to be hard science-fiction, something I haven’t read a lot of. For that reason, I’ve been curious to try and get friends and loved ones that are much more into sci-fi to read it and tell me what they think.

This is worth reading, despite its short-comings, but I think I might go back and finally read the trilogy in search of his better work.